“Planetary Motion” by Julie McNeill

Poetry Pause is the League of Canadian Poets’ daily poetry dispatch. Read “Planetary Motion” by Julie McNeill, first published in Poetry Pause in December 2020.


Planetary Motion

By Julie McNeill

as seen by NASA

From mission control,

these dances are always filled with nervous bodies:

Couples, crowds of moonsโ€ฆ

waiting for a turn at the photo booth

practicing their pose for New Horizonโ€™s fly-by.

The kisses of passing meteors, an entrรฉe into planethood for some.

The comets make a big play for attention

Impact in five, four, threeโ€ฆ

Did you see how Pluto and Charon gaze at each other?

The dwarf planet and the fat moon

equal misfits at the school dance.

What does the year book sayโ€ฆ destined forโ€ฆ an eternity together.

There arenโ€™t a lot of choices in these orbits.

Can Charon even see Plutoโ€™s big heart?

Smooth and unscathed โ€” young, they say โ€”

Pluto must think heโ€™s holding on to heaven.

What else could she be?


Copyright ยฉ Julie McNeill

First appeared in Poetry Pause on December 2, 2020.

A Toronto poet and graphic designer. Eager for the world to find peace.


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